I’m Beginning to Wonder About This Place

I’m beginning to wonder about this place.

It’s a tartar sauce of bachelors.

It’s a pair of dice for pretty maids.

There’s a murder in the cathedral.

The warrior poet king is still mad.

He got hit in the temple.

The jedi is in the trailer park.

Two Atheists got in an elevator.

The ninja is in the suburb.

God, bless our holy war!


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6 responses to “I’m Beginning to Wonder About This Place

  1. Sounds like a another day in the life of….America the beautiful. God bless us all.

  2. This is a really good poem BTW. You might want to post on The Community Storyboard. A strange mix of folk who hang out and share poetry and short stories. A very diverse group who offer feedback and support regarding each other’s writing.

    • Thank you so much! I had not heard of them before, so I took your advice and went to the page, but I couldn’t figure out how to submit. How do you?

      • There are submission guidelines , but the editors will give you posting privileges if you are interested. Unfortunately, you cannot reblog your own work to the pages as one with posting privileges, but posting on your own page first and the copying to the Storyboard is fine, so if you would like I can post for you and link to your page for you. I just need your permission to do so.

      • That would be great! You have my permission! Thank you so much!

  3. What is your email address? I will need that.

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